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d-day has,comeit's time,to go ( ).
d, dayhas come,it'stime togo ( ).
d day will come, whenit's time...go,( ).
d-daywill come, beforeit's timeto go: ( ).
d-day came,it is time,go (home).
by Web Correspondent on Thursday, July 12, 2007 at 8:57 PM | Permalink
this poem uses simple words, but a stunning interplay of line-cutting and the element of suspense
Comment by aries_arevalo_ax | July 21, 2007 at 9:54 AM
know what i read
this poem uses simple words, but a stunning interplay of line-cutting and the element of suspense
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July 21, 2007 at 9:54 AM